For a balanced life, an important area is our job.One way to think in a balanced life, is to take care in our job. When we intend to have a good result in our carrer it's important to be a team player.
The sucess comes with a good group of work and we can dedicate our time to work . It's important to be organized, make schedule and don't forget meetings, but be carefull not to be a workaholic.
When we work with a good team player the problems can be solved and people can help others.
Tania Danailof
Hi Tania,
ResponderExcluirCheck the underlined sords/sentences and read the notes below.
1. For a balanced life, an important area is our job. - I BELIEVE YOU SHOULD EXPLAIN THIS SENTENCE A LITTLE MORE. E.G. IN ORDER TO LEAD A BALANCED LIFE, AN IMPORTANT AREA WE NEED TO TAKE CARA IS OUR JOB...
2. intent - CHECK SPELLING
3. meets - YOU MEAN 'MEETINGS'?
4.PERSON IS SINGULAR, PLURAL WE HAVE .....?
Thanks for keeping the blog ALIVE....
ALE CAFÉ