I'm calm, confident and friendly. I like to work with a team player and an optimistic person.
When I was younger I used to go out and to drink a lot during all night with my friends. But my habits are changing and becoming better. Nowadays I love staying home, going out and traveling with my family. When I stay home, I love to listen to music, and to watch soccer on tv.
But, one thing didn't changed: I like to make friends like my classmates of União.
Arildo
Arildo
Hi there 'Who am I'...
ResponderExcluirI checked your writing and underlined some sentences/words. Take a look at them and check the notes below.
1.I have been calm, confidant and friendly - YOU'RE NOT ANYMORE?
2. like work - WE NEED TO SEPARATE THESE TWO VERBS...WHAT CAN YOU USE?
3.team player and optimistic person. - SINGULAR? DON'T WE NEED TO USE AN ARTICLE? E.G. A NURSE; AN OPTIMISTIC PERSON...
4. had changing and getting better - HERE WE HAVE SOME VERB CONFUSION- HAD-PAST CHANGING - GERUND? YOU MEAN HAD CHANGED? GETTING BETTER - YOU MEAN GOT BETTER?
5. football - DID YOU MEAN SOCCER?
6. doesn't changed - DOESN'T = PRESENT / CHANGED = PAST...HOW CAN WE CORRECT IT?
7. 'AS' YOU MEAN 'WITH'
YOU KNOW WHO I AM....rs