domingo, 11 de setembro de 2011

My Spending habits

I'm trying to be a thrifty person, but as I don't have time to make a schedule to keep a budget, I am spendthrift. I need to cut back on spending money as I'm doing. I have to keep track of my expenses and save enough to reach my goals. I don't need to be a cheapskate but it's essencial to have a budget that I can control my expenses and give me peace of mind.

Tania Danailof

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  1. Hi there Tania,
    Take a look at your writing and chek the underlines words/sentences.
    1. a thrifty - it's not a noun, it's an adjctive.
    2. How - it's misused here. The word you may use is 'as'
    3. i've been - remember to capitalize I...and you're not a spendthrift anymore?
    4. I've - we do notcntact I have...unless it's I've been, I've studed, etc.

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